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I can't breathe,
My lungs cease up,
I refuse to believe,
We just split up.
You can't see,
Me choking here,
This has to be,
My only fear.
~
I fight for air,
You walk on,
I fall to dispair,
You walk on.
Do you even care?
You've moved on.
~
You're my heartbeat,
Your beats stop,
I'm at your feet,
My life stops.
Why do you,
Do this to me?
You're never true,
I'm never free.
~
Now you see,
I couldn't breathe,
When you see,
My coffin leave.
Carried down,
Down the road,
Reason not found,
Only you know.
©2004-2009 ~FuchsiaSeraphim
:iconfuchsiaseraphim:

Author's Comments

Poem of a situation where a girl loves her guy so much, she can't live without him; rather literally also. A rather sad yet morbid poem, nevertheless; meant to be rather effective.

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:icondenati:
Omg, i love this SO much!!!!!

+fav for sure!!!!!!

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Verae amicitiae smpiternae sunt
:iconjazblack009:
wow few words used in the lines
yet a great message portrayed
:thumbsup:
morbids the flavour of the month so nice work

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“Nope, because Ryan said he’d shove my Playstation up my ass sideways if I made shit up.”
Morphogenesis:[link]
By Mokele
:iconxpyroxcrazedx:
That's amazing. Damn you talented people, damn you! :)

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+[It's better to burn out than to fade away.]+
+[It's better to be hated for who you are than loved for who you're not]+
:iconfuchsiaseraphim:
Rawr, thank you. Ain't had a comment on my poetry for some time. Thanks for looking through the gallery. <3

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~ The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams. ~
:iconxpyroxcrazedx:
Your welcome. ^^

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+[It's better to burn out than to fade away.]+
+[It's better to be hated for who you are than loved for who you're not]+

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