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Dark Angels.

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Disguised as mortal,
Reeking darkness undercover.
These creatures cannot fall,
The shade is their lover.
Lurking the city shades,
Tourn wings blending the ebony back.
Within seconds eerie is made,
Murdering light and its track.
~
They were once mortal,
Preyed on by the dark.
Tormented to the fall,
Leaving this sinister mark.
Running their blood cold,
They live to kill.
As if obeying as told,
Yet from it recieving a thrill.
~
Looking as though human,
Many foolish cross them,
Unaware they are far from Man,
Death is all that is cursed them.
Innocent lives lost,
They just laugh on,
For though to them, it has no cost,
They are already long gone...
A poem I writ, basically describing the supernatural beings known as 'Dark Angels'. Also known as fallen angels, or cursed humans.
© 2004 - 2024 FuchsiaSeraphim
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Jomoku's avatar
I like this poem.
It has a dynamic that i have dwelt on before and find very intricate.
To me this seems to describe those that dont care / want to watch the world burn.

There are always those things or people that are shaded.
In ways maybe only they know.

I think its very interesting the distinction between these 
aspects, whether its negative or positive in certain lights.

If someone is past living and cares not at all,
I would believe them to be gone already.
Mortality is a very addictive vice in a way.
I believe that although these dark aspects are
very grotesque , they are simply there.
And so as far as is my opinion /

-This is very well written, i like the word choice and the descriptions are unique.

One critique though : I see that the end may very well be a cliff hangar of sorts.
But on the other hand, a hint of finality might go well.
Or the lack of , as if never to say they are already gone.
Thank you for this. :)